Week 9 Comment

Hey Jesse
I really liked your analogy of your mind that you have used here. It’s fantastic. You have a real knack for using visual imagery as a means of describing thought patterns. The metaphoric language of “the shadows upon the wall of a grand, yet lifeless house” is quite haunting and provides a truly compelling and mysterious element to your entry. The photo you have used compliments this very well!
I also loved how you described your mind as needing to be freed from the house by the person who “grasps the horns of a beast that torments the household and wins the battle gloriously…” It is almost as if the freeing of the mind is a war of bloodshed and those who are victorious rise as triumphant. Excellent work!

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Posted by stephmarsden on May 15, 2012

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